Guild of Writers

A comic book. Interesting idea.
I like to draw comics, though my style may be too much like manga for your tastes.

I think this is a very well thought-out story. Keep up the good work!

This is thought through very well. I like how it both has a couple similarities to MYST puzzles and is different.
Maybe for the Crystalline Age, you could do something like the final puzzle of Amateria from MYST III, where there are pieces with the paths on them, and you have to match them up. Or ...