Guild of Writers

Shorah everyone, after months of hard work, I'm proud to present my first age, Shinelight Manor! Here's the files:

http://www.mediafire.com/?5n5ntnmdmhj

The age files say SparklingPalace, but that was just the beta name. When someone puts this on Drizzle, know that the display name should be "Shinelight Manor". The book spine is also in the files, so if it's possible to put it on the shelf before the next version of the offline KI, that'd be great

I hope you all enjoy Shinelight Manor!

I'm trying to download it, but it doesn't work for me. I always get the page where you upload files.

The link doesn't seem to be working

fixed

Nice place to relax and do some writing.

Was wondering whats the purpose of the link in Area? Seems a waste to have such a large room for just linking into. Also just a suggestion, perhaps a variety of textures for the library room, looks really impressive but once you see the repeating pattern, perhaps just changing the colors of some of the books, or leaving some empty spots on the shelves here and there.
Oh and I am not sure if it was something I was doing wrong, or perhaps a problem in your coding but when I clicked to sit on the chair (The one with your journal on the table) my avatar jumped around a bit b4 sitting down, then once he stood up was momentarily trapped between the chair and the table.


Otherwise great age, I look forward to seeing how it progresses, I shall Be doing some writing while relaxing.

Okay, it's on UAM now!

Great job. This is a nice age that looks quite comfortable. I like the link-in area. I can see explorers scheduling dance parties in Shinelight Manor. It wouldn't be for the shy either since you would link-in in the middle of the dance floor! The carpet texture on the floor in the link-in room is a nice touch. Some rolling ladders or step stools would be a good addition to the library. Movement up the stairs into the office is somewhat choppy and from certain angles, the lamp light blocks out the other lamp as well as the sketch on the desk. I like the coming soon hologram, can't wait to see more. The only thing I really dislike is the ceiling and door in the back room. Looking at them gives me a slight headache. (Or maybe it's time for me to get rid of my CRT. )

could someone post some screenshots please?

Link In

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Library

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Reading Room

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Office

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Back Room

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