by Rik » Tue Mar 19, 2013 1:58 pm
One more thing about Trebduvil, is the wording on the welcome sign. It says, "On a nearly normal and peaceful world surrounded by a calm sea lie stark, barren empty cubes of sandstone lie housing essences of places and ideas." The sentence is a little awkward, and I think one "lie" needs to be removed...probably the 2nd one would be best.