Thanks for the feedback, tachzusamm! I've made the changes to the proposal - see first post.
Since the fourth bullet that you suggested deals more with the community at large rather than the GoW members, I'm going to leave it off of the proposal. But I fully intend to use it in the announcement that I send to the Guild of Messengers. [I'll start a separate topic for the wording for that announcement once the voting is underway.]