I've been recently thinking about an age called core. Here is it's basic idea.
The age I've been thinking about recently is called Core and there is no linking book to it. I thought people would be able to access it by using some device (like the viewer in Rime) to attune a star fissure to a specific destination and then leaping in.
This leap would be like a link and you would here that weird noise and be hurdled into blackness except there would be no flyby. You would then arrive inside a small round room made of marble.
There would then be a large door with a circular symbol (insert puzzle). Once the door is opened you see that you are on a small floating mass of land floating in that star studded void which is the star fissure. You see that there are other floating masses orbiting around this gigantic glowing light in the center of the age. Little tiny shooting stars will also fly by to add to the mood.
On this small mass there isn't much except for the building you just came out of and a telescope. You will look through this telescope ( you can turn it 360 degrees around ) To find that if you look on one of the other masses you will see what looks like a stone arch. Nothing much happens and you move away from the telescope. If you walk around more on this mass you will find a stone arch like the other ( this will come into importance later ) and a small tunnel leading under the mass to a generator ( insert puzzle ).
Once you get the generator to work you can go up to the top of the mass to find that some stones on the telescope lit up. You then look through the telescope back to the stone arch and you now see yourself coming out of that arch and moving tword a telescope on that mass! You now look away from the telescope to find that you are on the other mass. This continues with different generator puzzles and some other marble temples giving hints until you finally make it to the last mass which has a stone bridge connected to the gigantic light.
You walk across the bridge to find that their is this large floating Crystal tower within the light. You then go in and this is where i need to work on more story board.
I would be delighted to know what you think of this age and will appreciate any comments and please don't just compliment. I want to know what I should add.
Note: I thought of some background story with another forum user and we came up with a D'ni civilization that has developed sight linking. Is that anny good?