Short Sample

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Short Sample

Postby biohaz » Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:40 pm

Here is a short little piece that I wrote for my friends who were doing a short movie of Shirley Jackson's "The Lottery" for a school assignment.
It is very short, but I was wondering if I could get some feedback about the style and overall impressions on the piece.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2416239/lottery.mp3
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Re: Short Sample

Postby griffinps3 » Thu Mar 04, 2010 7:18 pm

That's pretty good. I love classic stuff like that but I really wish it was longer.
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Re: Short Sample

Postby Xindhus » Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:07 am

I really, really like that. You might try sustaining the pedal note in the opening, particularly between the 3rd and 4th notes, but other than that, I can't think of any criticisms. Granted, that doesn't mean a whole heck of a lot. ;)
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