Here is a chatlog of a conversation I had with ChaosSong:
(11/02 20:03:20) Gorobay: anyway, did you want to talk about broken machinery or which?
(11/02 20:03:59) ChaosSong: the thread kinda died
(11/02 20:04:15) Gorobay: if people start posting again it could live
(11/02 20:04:30) ChaosSong: prolly cause it's so big no one wants to slog through it
(11/02 20:04:33) Gorobay: people just didn't have any more ideas
(11/02 20:05:00) Gorobay: but if people get interested it could work
(11/02 20:05:15) Gorobay: people have been working on SftSoK for years
(11/02 20:05:33) Gorobay: so i don't think it's the slogging that turns people away
(11/02 20:06:01) ChaosSong: I have some journals on pnp, but i'm not incredibly happy with them
(11/02 20:06:20) Gorobay: why?
(11/02 20:06:26) Gorobay: story or writing style?
(11/02 20:06:45) ChaosSong: more styleistic problems
(11/02 20:07:12) Gorobay: well what version of the story are you telling?
(11/02 20:08:07) ChaosSong: one antigonist native assassinates a small mining crew from the cavern
(11/02 20:08:18) Gorobay: oh
(11/02 20:08:30) Gorobay: where does the native come from?
(11/02 20:09:09) ChaosSong: local, he's more of an intelligent critter that a humanoid
(11/02 20:09:19) Gorobay: why is there only one native?
(11/02 20:09:37) ChaosSong: only one in the story anyways
(11/02 20:09:42) Gorobay: and did you get rid of the chemists?
(11/02 20:10:11) ChaosSong: no the crew is three chems and two miners
(11/02 20:10:18) Gorobay: ok good
(11/02 20:10:28) Gorobay: so why does the native kill them?
(11/02 20:10:40) Gorobay: i thought it was an explosion
(11/02 20:11:10) ChaosSong: that's the method of assassination
(11/02 20:11:14) Gorobay: ah
(11/02 20:11:22) Gorobay: does anyone survive?
(11/02 20:11:34) Gorobay: following escape routes was one big idea
(11/02 20:11:39) ChaosSong: either no or unlcear
(11/02 20:11:44) Gorobay: and if they die that couldn't work
(11/02 20:12:06) ChaosSong: well they could die trying to escape
(11/02 20:12:10) Gorobay: so what form would the puzzles take, since following their paths wouldn't work?
(11/02 20:12:26) Gorobay: oh
(11/02 20:12:46) Gorobay: any motive for the killing?
(11/02 20:12:52) Gorobay: or is that a mystery too?
(11/02 20:13:01) ChaosSong: defending teritorry
(11/02 20:13:05) Gorobay: oh
(11/02 20:13:16) ChaosSong: could be vauge i think
(11/02 20:13:25) Gorobay: i see one possible problem with this storyline
(11/02 20:13:42) Gorobay: who are the people who are killed? some of us?
(11/02 20:14:29) ChaosSong: yes, the native has to be smart enough to destroy links out
(11/02 20:15:06) Gorobay: actually, that's true, but i meant which of us would delete an avatar for the story's sake?
(11/02 20:15:15) ChaosSong: and that's the prob really is how to convey that intel
(11/02 20:15:42) ChaosSong: don't need avis for fictional characters...
(11/02 20:15:48) Gorobay: ah
(11/02 20:16:01) Gorobay: well i am uncomfortable with using fictional characters
(11/02 20:16:15) ChaosSong: all writers do
(11/02 20:16:26) Gorobay: yeah
(11/02 20:16:29) ChaosSong: heh
(11/02 20:16:31) Gorobay: that's not what i meant
(11/02 20:16:36) ChaosSong: i know
(11/02 20:16:36) Gorobay: let me rephrase
(11/02 20:16:55) Gorobay: i don't to make up fictional explorers working in that age
(11/02 20:17:05) Gorobay: i'd rather keep it all "real"
(11/02 20:17:36) ChaosSong: the problem with natives is that it's alot more work
(11/02 20:17:47) Gorobay: how so?
(11/02 20:17:55) Gorobay: we don't have to model them or act them
(11/02 20:18:27) ChaosSong: no but you have to describe their history, their culture, their science
(11/02 20:18:43) Gorobay: someone mentioned that on the forum
(11/02 20:18:48) Gorobay: and they suggested
(11/02 20:18:59) ChaosSong: you have to build them from the ground up as a character
(11/02 20:19:19) Gorobay: WE give the natives technology and whatnot, because they are not advanced enough to make their own
(11/02 20:19:33) Gorobay: you'd have to build anybody up as a character
(11/02 20:20:09) Gorobay: if the story says that we give them the science and tech of the rig/mine, then we just have to worry about culture
(11/02 20:20:18) ChaosSong: well if you want to write up journals with that story, please feel free
(11/02 20:20:22) Gorobay: and it's a mine so how much culture is there?
(11/02 20:20:49) Gorobay: i'd rather let a competent story-writer do that job
(11/02 20:20:52) Gorobay: not me
(11/02 20:21:22) Gorobay: anyway i think it is counterintuitive to do anything until evryone agrees on what we're doing
(11/02 20:21:36) Gorobay: otherwise people will work against each other without knowing it
(11/02 20:21:58) ChaosSong: there is no against
(11/02 20:22:10) Gorobay: i mean people could make opposite storylines
(11/02 20:22:20) ChaosSong: that's a good thing
(11/02 20:22:22) Gorobay: then someone's work will be thrown away
(11/02 20:22:25) ChaosSong: yes
(11/02 20:22:40) Gorobay: differing stories is good, but
(11/02 20:22:41) ChaosSong: recycled for another project if its good
(11/02 20:22:52) Gorobay: if they are too similar it can't be recycled
(11/02 20:23:11) Gorobay: two mine/rigs with assassinations is too much
(11/02 20:23:44) Gorobay: isn't it silly to spend so much effort on something when you don't even know what the other people are doing?
(11/02 20:23:49) ChaosSong: adapting a mine rig to a junlge hut or what have you isn't hard
(11/02 20:24:45) ChaosSong: for me the process is enjoyable even if it isn't included in the product
(11/02 20:24:45) Gorobay: it is easier to get a project done if everyone agrees instead of working on different things then realizing that as far as their project is concerned they have wasted their time
(11/02 20:25:01) Gorobay: well if it's enjoyable then go ahead
(11/02 20:25:07) ChaosSong: in final stages that may be true
(11/02 20:25:16) ChaosSong: but not when it's just launching
(11/02 20:26:14) Gorobay: how about we each explain our versions to each other
(11/02 20:26:18) ChaosSong: besides real world writers throw all kinds of stuff away
(11/02 20:26:50) ChaosSong: when i get happy with my journals i'll post em
(11/02 20:27:07) ChaosSong: just gonna take me longer than i thought at first
(11/02 20:27:30) Gorobay: can i tell you my version, in case it has some godd parts you may want to include?
(11/02 20:27:49) ChaosSong: I am using your escape parites plan
(11/02 20:27:57) Gorobay: besides that
(11/02 20:28:29) ChaosSong: the explorers dealing with natives part I have to stew over
(11/02 20:28:32) Gorobay: my idea is that we find natives in an age and they have a mine (or not: that doesn't matter a lot)
(11/02 20:28:43) Gorobay: then we give them technology
(11/02 20:28:50) Gorobay: to rig gas
(11/02 20:29:02) Gorobay: (why we want it we can figure out later)
(11/02 20:29:19) Gorobay: then we come by once a month or so to get the gas they mined
(11/02 20:29:35) Gorobay: we don't stay there because the age belongs to them not us
(11/02 20:29:51) Gorobay: then one day, when we go there, they aren't there
(11/02 20:30:04) Gorobay: there was an explosion/assassination whatever of a native
(11/02 20:30:23) Gorobay: we open the age to the public to figure out what happened
(11/02 20:30:41) ChaosSong: and who's your villian?
(11/02 20:30:54) Gorobay: whoever did the explosion
(11/02 20:30:59) Gorobay: a native
(11/02 20:31:03) Gorobay: a chemist or miner
(11/02 20:31:55) Gorobay: any problems or plotholes i missed?
(11/02 20:32:09) ChaosSong: I'm gonna hafta get my version out of my system if you want me to write that story, know what I mean?
(11/02 20:32:32) Gorobay: i guess
Here the conversation got to the subject of other project ideas, Ahnonay, and the creative writing process. Back on topic:(11/02 20:46:59) Gorobay: how can we get people interested in this? people seem strangely drawn to Yinfara but not this much
(11/02 20:47:31) ChaosSong: I was consideringwriting journals for Yinfara, help it clear the tubes
(11/02 20:47:52) Gorobay: those darn tubes just keep filling up with words, huh
(11/02 20:49:01) ChaosSong: I;m gonna post real soon on the BS thread that journals are gonna take me longer than i thought but I want to see whatever anyone thinks about it soon
(11/02 20:49:23) Gorobay: and i'll post the relevant bits of this conversation