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Looks and sounds great guys!

5TheStranger5 wrote:"I fear i cannot write much here of what has transgressed- but if i do not write it here then where? i have to record this somewhere; our ancient and sacred society must be preserved as it always has been....."

Well-written, but I think the word you're looking for is "transpired," which means "occurred." "Transgressed" means "passed beyond a boundary" or "acted in violation of law." Then again, I don't know the context intimately - you might have picked exactly the right word, for all I know.
Remember to capitalize the word "I," as well.
No offense meant at all - I just think the phrasing is quite good and it would be a shame to miss something as simple as the above.

Oh, yeah, and the Age looks nice, too.

Chacal wrote:The cables seem very bright in those pictures. I would expect cables to become quickly dark as they reach up to the ceiling.

Cables? What cables? I agree, they didn't look right. Honestly, they're more of a legacy idea from the original model. In the future, if enough time is available, I may reintroduce them with more detailed connections.

Also, I didn't like the way the stalagmite and stalagtite looked, so I re-modelled/textured them.

A facinating Age Stranger keep up the good work.

Interesting with a backstory here! And I really like the texturing of the age shown in these pics. Looks like a fascinating age coming up

That overhanging pathway looks like it may tempt a jumping party to see if it is secure.

The journal excerpts sound great, Stranger.

Yes, yes it may.