Guild of Writers

End of August is coming up fast!

Just a reminder to people - contest finishes at the END of August.

Here's my entry: Sholek's Temple

Awesome! =D

Grats of the release, Whil =D

*is uploading screenshots currently*

Really nice ! I like the fact that this isn't a place on the border of the lake it changes. Also nice integration of the structures in the cavern walls.


looking forward for these extensions too

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A small critic though, I like the fact that this is a really confined space but somehow it lacks a good panorama of the whole place, there is no spot where you can enjoy the view of the whole complex. ( I'm saying that because you can have such views with flymode).
Also the camera transition at the top of the stairs is a bit abrupt..

Really looking forward for the next areas.

PS: also love the rubble on the pavement it rejuvenates this overused texture nicely !

You can find screenshots here: http://guildofartisans.org/uruages/tosholek/

!! Excellent !!

The music goes with and matches Sholeck's role and the age of Tosholek perfectly. I have just one question..

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What is the significance the of the rotating word HAX!

Note that Sholek's Temple is a location, in D'ni, rather than an Age =)

HAX! is due to what you had to do to see it >.>

‹(•¿•)› Dah - LOL

Those two locations have much future promise I hope to see them in the future...

Excellent job with Tosholek! The music fits perfectly and there are some very nice touches.

One point that isn't immediately obvious in-game: This area is not on the shore of the lake. It's an area inside the solid rock. Sholek had an artificial "lake" made with an automatic feeding system. That's why it is still much brighter than in the cavern itself.