The Life of a Modern Day D'ni Writer

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The Life of a Modern Day D'ni Writer

Postby Justintime9 » Tue Dec 25, 2007 10:18 am

this is a video I made, dedicated to the opening of the guilds. Tell me what you think :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cn96b7dGa2E
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Re: The Life of a Modern Day D'ni Writer

Postby Trylon » Tue Dec 25, 2007 2:23 pm

I think it's a great concept.

Unfortunately, it comes across as a bit too slow to me, after about two minutes I showed signs of boredom (not meant as negative criticism!!).
Maybe you can speed it up somehow....

In the first scene where you write in the book, I couldn't really get a sense of direction, it was a bit like "am I going somewhere or not...?" Maybe cutting that to about 3 to 8 seconds would do the trick.

Good effort still!
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Re: The Life of a Modern Day D'ni Writer

Postby Justintime9 » Tue Dec 25, 2007 9:29 pm

lol, well that was the first video I made in Movie maker, and fraps. I actually origionally Intended to show me write a whole page, but I thought that would be too long :P
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Re: The Life of a Modern Day D'ni Writer

Postby Kierra » Wed Dec 26, 2007 6:20 pm

Thats actually a really good idea, I like it! /claps

I think it would be really great promotional material if we started making videos like this to show the community. Participation optional of course, but I really like the idea.

One question....how did you get a first person video shot like that? LOL

Enlighten me please, I'm imagining a cam-corder duct taped to your head :lol:

Would you mind if I borrow your idea to make my own? :D

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Re: The Life of a Modern Day D'ni Writer

Postby bluewyvern » Wed Dec 26, 2007 8:56 pm

Very cool. I really like exploring the IC-side of Writing. :)

One little nit...you do know that you can't link to an Age until it's finished, right? No checking on it in-progress! You just Write with the Age you want in your head, then when you're done, link and hope for the best!

Nice video, though. I look forward to seeing others.
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Re: The Life of a Modern Day D'ni Writer

Postby Kierra » Wed Dec 26, 2007 10:28 pm

*cough*Yeesha*cough*Relto*cough*cough*

:D

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Re: The Life of a Modern Day D'ni Writer

Postby Trylon » Thu Dec 27, 2007 1:16 am

bluewyvern wrote:One little nit...you do know that you can't link to an Age until it's finished, right? No checking on it in-progress! You just Write with the Age you want in your head, then when you're done, link and hope for the best!


Well that's how the D'ni did it, but perhaps not how we are forced to do it :)
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Re: The Life of a Modern Day D'ni Writer

Postby Justintime9 » Thu Dec 27, 2007 8:07 am

Kierra wrote:Thats actually a really good idea, I like it! /claps

I think it would be really great promotional material if we started making videos like this to show the community. Participation optional of course, but I really like the idea.

One question....how did you get a first person video shot like that? LOL

Enlighten me please, I'm imagining a cam-corder duct taped to your head :lol:

Would you mind if I borrow your idea to make my own? :D

~Kia

Sure! go ahead :D and, first of all, I filmed the video part with a digital camera, and just converted the file to a .avi file http://www.mediaconverter.org/ (so it was pretty light) and then, when I needed to use both my hands, I had my brother (known as Andy12 in MOUL) hold it for me... and if I didn't have to hold one side of my book, I could've done it w/ one hand :P so, ya, go right ahead and use my Idea... I was wondering why no one thought of making videos of GoW ages before :D
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