Ellis Fen

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Ellis Fen

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The name is sure to change as soon as I can think up a good one, but for now I'm calling this one "Realm".

A couple screenies:

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It's in it's infancy development wise (two days old, in fact), so everything is subject to change, but thats what I've got so far :)

It has no storyline yet either, I'm kind of hoping it will suddenly appear as I'm building it :lol:

~Kia
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Not bad. I look forward to seeing more. :)
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Looks cool! If you don't mind a little constructive criticism (if you do, just skip over this), but I think you may want to add a little more contrast between colors. Right now, the whole grey/light brown/dark green really blend into each other. Perhaps use a little deeper brown for the wood, or a brighter green for the moss. Just a suggestion.
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I missed this thread so far; I have no idea how.. (actually I know, I don't read this subforum enough; I still have to compliment you about Aerie.. :oops: )

This Age has some serious potential.. I really like the concept and the current look (I love 'vegetal' Ages). I'm curious to see where you will take it.
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Needs more Shroomiebells!

Sorry, couldn't resist. :D

Nice work. I like the delicate structures.
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Re: "Realm" rename: Ellis Fen

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Progress continues, and a name has been decided: "Ellis Fen"

Fen is an old word for an inland marsh. Ellis....well, thats storyline :D
Here's a sneak peak at the linking book cover:
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More screenies to come when I'm at a good point to show my progress :D

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Re: "Realm" rename: Ellis Fen

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Nice job on the cover! I would be very intrigued if I stumbled upon this somewhere! :)
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